Tuesday, December 18, 2007

The One-Sided Story

The Lord of the Flies is a literary masterpiece by William Golding. It argues that human nature is corrupt and savage and it is society that ties down our animal instincts. This being a powerful thesis, Golding wrote an allegorical novel full of details and ideas supporting his universal statement. The film adaptation of the book by Harry Hook, fails at upholding Golding’s key ideas and thus the very purpose of the book. The end product is an entertaining yet a meaningless movie.

The nationality of the group of boys that landed on the island differed from the novel. In the movie, the boys are American while in the novel they are British. Golding had a purpose when he specifically chose British boys to land on the island. He wanted to begin the story, his personal essay, with boys that are universally known as good. Etiquette, well manners, and dignity are dominant factors in the British culture. The children on this island were raised with this culture well imprinted in their minds; therefore there is little chance for them to become bad. Golding had put a special emphasis on how the very best of us have the capability to turn into savages and turn to its liberation. One could argue that because the boys in the movie were American, that is the reason why they did not succeed at surviving. If this movie had kept the nationality of the boys the same as in the book, there would be no room for counter arguments as Golding had intended it.

The most important aspect of the entire story is when Simon speaks to the Lord of the Flies. When Simon speaks to the Lord of the Flies, the idea that humans have no escape from their true nature is reconfirmed. It is Simon’s conscience informing him that the violence he sees taking place represent the reality of human existence and to give in to it. This event was a key supporting detail to Golding’s allegorical novel. Since this significant event was not included in the movie, the movie loses its allegorical meaning.

The elements of technology and the modern world which are found in the movie also hinder the purpose of the novel. They leave room for opposition to Golding’s ideas. One could argue that the time period which the boys grew up in was humanity’s darkest time since people stopped relying on each other but on technology. These boys growing with the availability of technology could have a history of social isolation. Therefore, they do not know how to interact with their fellow people and thus never knew good. One could also argue since these boys use profanity so readily they are already corrupt before they even landed on the island.

The removal of a fundamental event and the implantation of a different culture and time period create an entertaining movie. However, the true purpose of the story is lost and a one-sided story is left behind.

9 comments:

brave new world reader said...

You show a really great understanding of the symbolic and literal meanings of the book that were lost inthe production of the film. I really enjoyed reading your essay because of your great use of language and sentence structure. I don't see any room for improvement with this essay.

Flawless job :D

Micah Schroeder

brave new world reader said...

PS you get a 6/6

Micah Schroeder

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Anonymous said...

I like your discussion of the presence of technology in the movie. It's something I never considered. Your introduction and conclusion are both strong as well.
I'm not sure what you mean about "one-sided". To me, the movie makes a weaker statement more open to argument than Golding's thesis, which could be called one-sided. Also, I don't know if Simon's discussion with the Lord of the Flies is necessary for the allegory, for me it simply emphasizes the symbolic level for the reader.
I'm also unsure about why British boys are considered more good than American boys. Can you explain about the culture the movie boys are coming from? Emphasize the British importance of etiquette more? Perhaps you are arguing they are more civilized, not more good. Overall, the arguments in the body of your essay don't quite make sense to me.
Mark: 4/6
Carolyn Nakagawa

Anonymous said...

I like it because you show good understanding of the book and the film. You know whats going on between both things.
5/6
Shervin Nejad

Phalaenopsis said...

As usual, great work Shadi. Do I need to say anymore? ;)

Other than few bad choice of words here and there, your essay is well constructed and delivered. I have to agree with Carolyn, what was the reason behind your title?

6/6
HyunJin Na

hihiiiihihihihihihihihihi said...

Very good essay. You understood the theme and the sybolisms that are expressed in the novel. Also, the structure was very nice and organized.

hihiiiihihihihihihihihihi said...

P.S. 6/6

The Dweller said...

harry potter is Howard.